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Choose words and phrases that will appeal to and leave your readers feeling fully persuaded.","locked_sets":[],"owner":1062128944,"hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3554325]},{"locked_sets":[],"description":"Your claim and counterclaim should be addressed evenly and objectively. Be sure to address both your claim and counterclaim fairly and in a neutral manner, while also clearly distinguishing the details of each so your reader can see the differences.","id":11047059,"can_remove":1,"symbol":"Discuss counterclaim fairly","hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3554325],"owner":1062128944},{"hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3554325],"owner":1062128944,"description":"Your claim and counterclaim are clearly distinguished and well-developed in this section. Be sure that you address them in a similar manner throughout the rest of your essay.","locked_sets":[],"symbol":"Distinguished counterclaim","can_remove":1,"id":11047041},{"removable_sets":[3554325],"hidden":0,"owner":1062128944,"locked_sets":[],"description":"The reasoning that you include should effectively explain how your data and evidence support your claim. Fully explain the connection between your claim and each piece of evidence so that your audience can understand how they relate to one another.","id":11047158,"symbol":"Explain connections","can_remove":1},{"symbol":"Focus on task","can_remove":1,"id":11047146,"description":"This section of your essay does not appear to be strongly focused on the task. Reread the assignment and then revise your writing so that each section of your essay works to effectively respond to all parts of the task.","locked_sets":[],"owner":1062128944,"hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3554325]},{"can_remove":1,"symbol":"Focus your ideas","id":11047160,"description":"Review this section and stay focused on defending your position on the scientific topic throughout your writing. A scientific essay should use factual evidence and vocabulary related to the topic in order to support the claim.","locked_sets":[],"owner":1062128944,"hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3554325]},{"locked_sets":[],"description":"Fully explain the strengths and limitations of your claim and counterclaim so your reader understands all aspects of your argument.","id":11047145,"can_remove":1,"symbol":"Fully explain evidence","hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3554325],"owner":1062128944},{"description":"The explanations that you include should be grounded in scientific ideas and principles. Revise this section to ensure that each statement you make is based on ideas and principles known in the scientific field.","locked_sets":[],"can_remove":1,"symbol":"Ground explanations in science","id":11047144,"removable_sets":[3554325],"hidden":0,"owner":1062128944},{"owner":1062128944,"hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3554325],"id":11047154,"can_remove":1,"symbol":"Include factual evidence","locked_sets":[],"description":"Specific, factual data and evidence are needed to support your claim. Find and include evidence that is closely related to this scientific topic to help support this idea."},{"id":11047161,"can_remove":1,"symbol":"Organize ideas effectively","locked_sets":[],"description":"Consider how you organize your ideas here. Your essay should follow a logical progression of ideas so your reader can clearly understand how each idea is connected to the next.","owner":1062128944,"hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3554325]},{"locked_sets":[],"description":"The evidence that you have included here may not be the most relevant or appropriate for this topic. Examine the sources and choose evidence that is closely related to this scientific topic and which works to effectively support your claim or counterclaim.","id":11047096,"symbol":"Review evidence","can_remove":1,"hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3554325],"owner":1062128944},{"removable_sets":[3554325],"hidden":0,"owner":1062128944,"description":"Consider your word choice here. Use words and phrases that are specific to the scientific topic that you are discussing.","locked_sets":[],"can_remove":1,"symbol":"Review word choice","id":11047168},{"description":"A conclusion works to bring your argument to a close, leaving your reader fully persuaded about your position on this scientific topic. Include a clear conclusion at the end of your writing in order to bring the claim, evidence, and reasoning that you have discussed to an effective conclusion.","locked_sets":[],"can_remove":1,"symbol":"Revise conclusion","id":11047163,"hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3554325],"owner":1062128944},{"symbol":"Revise introduction","can_remove":1,"id":11047162,"description":"An introduction is used to lead your reader into your discussion of this scientific topic. Include a clear introduction to your writing in order to better frame the claim, evidence, and reasoning that you will be discussing.","locked_sets":[],"owner":1062128944,"hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3554325]},{"description":"Help your readers understand your position on this scientific topic by stating a clear and specific claim. Address the qualitative aspects (involving words and observations) or the quantitative aspects (involving numbers and measurable data) that will clearly communicate your main point on this topic. ","locked_sets":[],"can_remove":1,"symbol":"State claim clearly","id":11047151,"removable_sets":[3554325],"hidden":0,"owner":1062128944},{"hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3554325],"owner":1062128944,"description":"This is a strong statement of your claim. Be sure that all parts of your essay, including the evidence and reasoning that you provide, continue to connect back to this precise statement regarding the scientific topic.","locked_sets":[],"can_remove":1,"symbol":"Strong claim","id":11047039},{"description":"This conclusion is an effective ending to your essay. Be sure that you've thoroughly addressed these ideas about the scientific topic in your introduction and body paragraphs as well.","locked_sets":[],"symbol":"Strong conclusion","can_remove":1,"id":11047053,"hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3554325],"owner":1062128944},{"hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3554325],"owner":1062128944,"locked_sets":[],"description":"The evidence that you include in this section is strong. Continue to choose relevant, appropriate data and evidence to help support your claim and counterclaim.","id":11047042,"can_remove":1,"symbol":"Strong evidence"},{"hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3554325],"owner":1062128944,"description":"The explanation that you provide in this section clearly demonstrates how the evidence supports your claim. Continue to apply these scientific ideas and principles throughout your essay to logically explain the connection between the evidence and your claim.","locked_sets":[],"can_remove":1,"symbol":"Strong explanation","id":11047044},{"owner":1062128944,"removable_sets":[3554325],"hidden":0,"id":11047047,"can_remove":1,"symbol":"Strong focus","locked_sets":[],"description":"Your focus on the scientific topic in this section is strong. Continue to focus this thoroughly throughout the rest of the essay, being sure to address all parts of the question."},{"symbol":"Strong introduction","can_remove":1,"id":11047051,"description":"This is a strong introduction to your essay. Be sure to thoroughly develop these ideas about the scientific topic throughout your body paragraphs and conclusion as well.","locked_sets":[],"owner":1062128944,"hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3554325]},{"hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3554325],"owner":1062128944,"description":"Your organization in this section is strong. Incorporate transitional words and phrases (like \"in addition,\" \"for instance,\" or \"on the contrary\") throughout your essay to help your readers clearly see the relationships between your claim, evidence, and reasoning.","locked_sets":[],"can_remove":1,"symbol":"Strong organization","id":11047049},{"owner":1062128944,"removable_sets":[3554325],"hidden":0,"symbol":"Strong reasoning","can_remove":1,"id":11047045,"description":"The reasoning in this section is strong. Be sure that each of your explanations considers the knowledge level and possible concerns of the audience. This will help you make sure your explanations will be understandable to your reader.","locked_sets":[]},{"locked_sets":[],"description":"Nice use of scientific language in this sentence. Continue choosing words related to this topic that also consider your audience's knowledge level and concerns, or that help in your purpose of persuading them.","id":11047058,"can_remove":1,"symbol":"Strong scientific language","removable_sets":[3554325],"hidden":0,"owner":1062128944},{"hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3554325],"owner":1062128944,"description":"Your tone and style in this sentence fit the scientific writing structure well. Review the rest of your essay to ensure that all sentences are written in this serious, professional manner.","locked_sets":[],"symbol":"Strong tone and style","can_remove":1,"id":11047056},{"description":"When writing a scientific essay, you must write in a way that is professional and free of emotion. 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